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The shot was taken in the Trascau mountains a good while back when I still had long hair.

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I did more shots to capture the whole scenery. I had some problems with a bush in the middle of the picture, but I couldn't help it.
I seriously hope you will enjoy it.

I did then some minor edits in PS ...

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I appreciate any kind of comment and look forward to critique.

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Submitted on: September 21, 2011
Image Size: 2.1 MB
Resolution: 3408×627

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Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D40
Shutter Speed: 1/320 second
Aperture: F/9.0
Focal Length: 18 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Date Taken: April 21, 2009
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows

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Critique by ~STlNKER Dec 2, 2011, 12:38:14 AM

Mark - This critique is only a add-on to the first Critique

I really thought about writhing this critique, as there is already one... but here I am. Mine will be a tiny little bit worse than the first one.
First things first:
I do like the picture, and I especially like that you are on the picture! This is really cool. But most other things are already mentioned by the first critique.

So here is some "advise" - but that's what critique is for, isn't it?
Somehow this picture lacks the compensation of the light a little bit. So at the right side the sky is just blank. Furthermore the left side is really quite highly saturated, while the right side is a little bit "greyer". I know this problem as I take panoramic pictures, too. Still there are some ways to get around this problem.
1. You could take further panoramas at different exposure levels to blend them together.
2. You could take RAW-pictures and edit them in Photoshop, so that you don't lose any texture...

Well, again, I know this problem which is really tricky to solve, so good job,
schöne Grüße,
Stinker

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Critique by =Cananga-Odorata Sep 21, 2011, 3:24:56 PM

as i already said:
i LOVE your photos and the country.
it looks like painted with the most colorful tones.
the mountains are so amazing and it gives me a feeling like freedom.

i also can see u now with long hair x'D and it looks nice
oh and by the way:
no reason for doubts. even if its compounded of many particularly photos, its amazing despite and i cant really see the problem with the bush / lil tree.
so dont worry.

hope i can see more of ur awesome photos in near future!
really nice done.
(and sry for bad english, wont write in german.)